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CHICK LIT & WRITING FOR RDI
cathy's article posted: 4.01.03

 

INTRODUCTION:

"Am assured, receptive, response woman of substance.  My sense of self comes not from other people but from... from... myself?  That can't be right."

So speaks Bridget Jones, a character often put at the forefront of a not-so-new literary genre playfully called Chick Lit.  Already years old in Britain, these coming-of-age tales about urban twenty-or-thirty-somethings is storming shelves in the U.S. and Europe as we speak... and with enough success that it seems that almost every publisher is jumping on the bandwagon.  So what's the story behind these stories?  Why are they popular, how are they different than romance, and what does it take to write them?

After this talk, I hope that you'll have a better sense of this genre, who's looking for it, and whether or not it's a market you want to pursue...

 

ROMANCE v. WOMEN'S FICTION v. CHICK LIT

First, we'll start with some basic definitions.

Romance:  One we all know.  Romances are stories centered around a love relationship between a man and a woman, with equal time devoted to the female & male points of view as a general rule.  Traditionally told in the third person, usually with alternating male and female POV.  Can be historical, contemporary, or futuristic, of varying lengths.

Women's Fiction:  This is a more loosely defined category.  Technically, romance and Chick Lit could both be considered sub-genres of Women's Fiction, if you consider Women's Fiction to be any fiction that focuses on women's lives, issues and concerns.  Unlike romance, women's fiction can cover friendships between women, the relationships within a family (with particular emphasis on women) and not cover a love relationship at all.  Case in point:  The Divine Secrets of the Ya Ya Sisterhood, a story about the dynamics of both a mother and daughter and a group of friends.  Women's fiction is often told in the third person, but it's not as standard as in romance, and normally female POV is dominant.  Also, women's fiction is less structured and has more ability to delve more deeply into "unhappy" or "unheroic" subject matter.  An example given:  in a single-title romance, the "hero" maybe have been a former alcoholic, now sober... in women's fiction, the male character can still be struggling with his addiction and how the female characters respond to this struggle can be a focal point.  While the ending of a women's fiction novel is often uplifting, it is by no means a guarantee of Happily Ever After.

Which leads us to Chick Lit.

 

WHAT IS CHICK LIT, ANYWAY?

Chick Lit is a subset of women's fiction that focuses on a slightly younger reading demographic than most romances or standard women's fiction, from approximately 18 to 35 years old.  These novels tend to have characters which are young women in that age group (general late twenties -- early thirties) in a more urban setting (New York, London, Chicago, Los Angeles).  The majority of the Red Dress Ink books published have been in the first person, as have many other popular Chick Lit titles -- Melissa Bank's "Girl's Guide to Hunting and Fishing", Sophie Kinsella's "Confessions of a Shopaholic", or of course, the prototype for this genre, the diary stylings of Helen Fielding's irrepressible Bridget Jones.  Male POV rarely invades this genre, although a parallel genre, called "Lad Lit" by the London press, is making a showing with books like "High Fidelity" by Nick Hornby or "About a Boy". 

 

WHAT IS THE APPEAL OF CHICK LIT FOR READERS?

Now -- keep in mind, these are my theories.  I haven't conducted a sociological study.  These are based on my observations on the Red Dress Ink message boards, from statements made by readers in Amazon and Barnes & Noble.com reviews, and culled from articles in newspapers and magazines, both here and abroad.

Chick Lit readers can be romance readers... there is a definite cross-over appeal, since Bridget Jones' Diary is basically a romance, based on the classic Jane Austen's "Pride and Prejudice."  Only in this case, Elizabeth Bennett would have slept with Wickham several times while her mother left MR. Bennet for some kind of elder gigolo-criminal type! 

Characters in Chick Lit novels might be considered promiscuous by romance standards.  Even in the most steamy romance novels, the hero and heroine largely remain monogamous.  I can think of several cases where the hero sleeps with other women, usually early on, before he becomes emotionally involved with the heroine.  Always, cases of "infidelity" or promiscuity are explained, since there is an emotional connection.  The other main exceptions to this rule are the super erotics, like Susan Johnson or Emma Holly, or anything from Black Lace.  In Chick Lit, sex doesn't have to have emotional involvement -- although it's something that the female characters often want, they often meet with dismal or hilarious failures on this front.  This is what separates it from the erotics, as well... the fact that the "heroine" may sleep with several men has little to do with eroticism and titillation.  Rather, it's often a way to illustrate with wry humor and not a little bit of frustration that the modern woman has to kiss a lot of frogs if she wants to find a prince... if there's even one out there. 

Nevertheless, sex is only one issue covered by Chick Lit novels... and it's not a predominant one.  The female characters deal with issues anyone who's been single in a city in the nineties should be able to relate to:  sex is only one of them.  The others?  Relationships are right there at the fore:  women are still looking for love, and in this age of having-it-all, they are contemplating who exactly Mr. Right is and whether or not they want him.   The relationship traumas and depictions of single life are covered more intently than they might be in romances.  The readers have seen an increasing divorce rate, they've suffered nothing but frogs in their dating pool for some time, and while the occasional romance novel is definitely entertaining and heartwarming, it can also be depressing when you finish and return to your half-empty fridge, empty apartment, and zero-message answering machine.  As screwball and far-fetched as some Chick Lit scenarios can become, Chick Lit readers find it far more likely that a woman like themselves would be thrown in jail in Thailand than be swept off their feet by a handsome multi-millionaire Beta hero that they then fight their attraction for.  When a Chick Lit heroine finds true love, it's usually after enough of a realistic struggle that the readers feels like she, too, has a chance, even with a history of bad dates, worse sex, and outrageous bad fortune... and when a Chick Lit novel doesn't end with a relationship, marriage, kids, or guarantees of any sort, but still winds up happy and fulfilled, the reader feels that vindication as well.

Beyond questions of love, relationships and men, what other issues are brought up in Chick Lit?  Running a close second:  careers.  Early Chick Lit novels were populated by such high-profile fields as publicity, publishing, advertising, marketing, fashion.  Ordinarily the heroine would be in a low level position in one of these glamorous fields, plagued with questions of personal fulfillment, advancement, and office politics.  Again, these should be funny, but still resonate with the reader. Think Ally McBeal meets Dilbert... a single woman trapped in the hell of Cubeville with an evil boss, that they may or may not be attracted to or hate, or both.

There are also issues of friendships and family. There are some stock "friend" characters in the world of Chick Lit, and these characters can either be pushed to the fore and share the story (as in Marian Keyes' "Last Chance Saloon" or my RDI, "L.A. Woman") or they become vehicles to demonstrate the heroines environment, much as friend characters have been used in romance novels for years.  They often help with humor and contribute to the overall "Voice" of the story.  As far as family, they can provide both comedy and drama, because they're rarely simple relationships.  IN many cases, friends can be more like family to the Chick Lit heroine than blood relatives.  A case in point:  See Jane Date, by Melissa Senate, has her heroine jumping through hoops to meet family expectations -- expectations that are hurtful and seem like a throwback to a stereotypical fifties where a woman's value is based on her marital status.

Finally, I think there's a definite theme of "What should I be doing with my life?"  This is literature about women in crossroad situations.  Bridget Jones is in crossroads because she's realizing that she's going to die single and be discovered half-eaten by wild dogs if she doesn't get her act together.  Rachel in Marian Keyes' "Rachel's Holiday" discovers that she has a serious drug addiction, and while a lot of her observations are humorous (she goes into rehab thinking it will be a cool place to meet celebrities, lose weight and enjoy a lot of spa-like amenities) the subject matter -- addiction and recover -- is eye-opening and serious.  While it could be argued that romantic fiction usually also starts with a crossroads-type choice (otherwise known as the Inciting Incident), the questions that Chick Lit prompts usually involve women who don't know what the right answer is, while in romantic fiction, there is usually a dire situation which prompts a main goal for the hero and/or heroine.  For example:  Nora Roberts' "Heaven and Earth" opens with a woman who is trying to run away from her abusive husband.  That is a crossroad situation:  go back to life of abuse, or attempt to hide, living in fear?  Her goal becomes clear:  hide from husband.  During the course of the story, all her choices will be made with that in mind, and you know that she will prevail and fall in love in the process.  Or take a category novel, with less serious overtones.  In Jennifer Cruisie's "Manhunting", her heroine decides in the beginning (because her life is in a crossroad) that she needs to find a husband who is suitable for her, and plots a course of action to achieve just that.  In Chick Lit, the crossroad is less clearly defined, and the consequent action plan much less linear.  For example, Sara Milnowski's "MilkRun" has the following inciting incident:  the heroine, Jackie, is dumped via email by her boyfriend who is "finding himself" in Thailand.  Her only goal is to "get over him"... but does that mean by finding a new man, or not finding a new man?  Further, there are frequent side-voyages, into her career, her friendships, and how she deals with her life.  Chick Lit can be much less linear than romantic fiction.  It may not always work, granted, but it is accepted.

 

VOICE  A.K.A. WHAT THE HELL IS 'HIP' AND 'EDGY'?

Voice is already an elusive subject, for any genre fiction writer.  So how can you see if you have the right "voice" for RDI or any form of Chick Lit?  Red Dress Ink has stated that they're looking for stories that are 'hip', 'urban' and 'edgy.' 

So what does that mean?

Here are my own definitions... here's hoping they help.

HIP:  in step with, or one step ahead of, what's currently in style... generally related to popular culture.  Being 'hip' is meant to show the readers that the author and novel's characters should be both empathized with and envied by turns by the target readership.  Readers on the RDI boards post that they "live vicariously through RDI novels."  They want experiences they understand, but they also want experiences that are more exciting than their lives.  Examples in use:  often brand names of popular designers, stores, popular shows, cultural references.  "With my next promotion, I was hoping to upgrade my wardrobe from The Gap to DKNY."  Note:  both the references to the stores and the verb 'upgrade' count on the hip factor... this is a relatively lame example, but you get the idea.  However, I would also warn further -- a little goes a long way. You don't want to say "One glance at my Swatch watch told me I was late, so I threw on my Manolo Blahniks, chugged the last of my Odwalla and jumped into my Passat."

URBAN:  Pertaining to experiences that are common to people in large urban areas.  High housing costs, high profile jobs, and larger-than-life social settings that are more appropriate to large metropolitan areas are prime examples.  A more diverse group of friends or people the characters interact with. A faster pace, both in lifestyle and in writing style, exemplifies this.

EDGY: Often shocking (or borderline shocking), unapologetic, truthful, and most importantly to anyone who's been turned down in category fiction: unheroic. A woman who sleeps around in category is promiscuous... in Chick Lit, she's having fun and exploring her options.  Not that edginess only pertains to sex, but it's one of the easiest ways to be both shocking and truthful.  Using the example of Rachel again -- you have a heroine who goes on a cocaine binge.  (Warning -- this won't fly at Red Dress.  Drugs are still a taboo.)

The best way to see if you have (or even want) a Chick Lit voice is to read some examples or watch movies in a similar vein, tuning in to both situations and dialogue (examples:  BJD, Life or Something Like It, Someone Like You).  The best way to develop a Chick lit voice is the same -- although beware of mimicking too closely.  There is now enough of a body of work in this genre for definite stereotypes to have cropped up -- and while readers are looking for the familiar, they're also more likely to become easily bored with something too close to what they've already read.  RDI is currently dealing with the growing pains of their second and third year of purchases.  While their initial offerings centered around a female character and the trials and tribulations of dating, they're now trying to expand away from that format and offer more diverse fare.  More on that in the Market section.

 

PROS AND CONS OF WRITING FOR CHICK LIT:

Pros:

- More flexibility in story line, since it's a broader genre.  You can have a love story... or not.  It can be a series of vignettes (although if you're writing for Red Dress Ink, a recognizable character/story arc is still necessary.)  It can have first or third person POV, from one or many characters.  And it's still evolving.

-  More freedom in language and subject matter.  Again, if you've written for category, the ability to name people and brand names, to curse if you want to, and to use slang is a welcome change.  The only taboo I've hit so far is drug use... and in Bridget Jones The Edge Of Reason, there's a hysterical depiction of a psychedelic mushroom trip, so even that's not an across-the-board rule.

-   Higher visibility as a writer.  Every RDI since its inception has been reviewed in Publisher's Weekly... not always positively, granted, but it's more than you're likely to get from a category or most standard Single Titles.  The covers are more artistic, and they're being more prominently placed in many retail bookstores.  RDI is also doing well in foreign markets. 

-   More money.  Advances run from $7k to $10k, often with multi-book deals for first-time authors.

 

Cons:

-  If you include modern references in an attempt to be 'hip', your work will be easily dated.  Don't necessarily expect a reprint of it ten or 20 years later.  With a lot of contemporary details, you shorten the shelf life.

-  You may lose your genre readership if you use your romance pen name... or you'll have difficulty transferring your Chick Lit fans to romance should you decide to genre-jump.  If you plan to retain both readerships, it's a tough sell -- there's overlap, but it's not completely interchangeable.

-   It's 95-110k words... a bigger time investment than if you're used to writing 50-60k category fiction.

-   It's NOT FOR EVERYONE.  Just as some historical writers shouldn't try contempt simply because "the money's good," no one should try Chick Lit for purely financial reasons.  Still, if you feel like you've got a story for modern, urban dating women, about coping with Mr. Maybes and day-jobs-from-hell, still trying to get your act together & having a lot of fun in the process, then Chick Lit may be the venue for you!

 

The Market

There is a lot of buzz in the industry about Chick Lit right now -- while many may be blasé about the genre on the other side of the pond (in Britain), in the U.S. it's a growing market that taps on a coveted younger demographic of female readers.  Harlequin's Red Dress Ink is an example.  While they have stated that they will not treat RDI as a "line" like their other romance novels, many readers are recognizing the publisher and picking up their offerings in a manner similar to the category "line" mentality -- they're picking up a Red Dress Ink, not necessarily the author.  At least, not yet.  The print run has been quoted as 50 thousand, and the first offering, Melissa Senate's See Jane Date, is scheduled for a mass-market reprint next year, and sales have apparently been strong... strong enough that they're definitely moving forward, and they're beginning to "evolve" the line.  Now, Margaret Marbury is looking for women's fiction in any format, whether it's a novel or linked stories (like Girl's Guide to Hunting & Fishing), or three novellas like Jane Green's "Babyville."  She's looking for grounded fiction rather than fantastical situations and she said that anything goes as long as it appeals to women and has strong commercial appeal, something that's high concept can be easily distilled into an appealing back cover copy.  NAL has also been bidding aggressively on various Chick Lit offerings, in addition to women's fiction trade paperback for its "Accent" line.  (People who were at New Orleans probably got the trade paperback giveaway "Tending Roses".)   Pocket has also been aggressively buying for its Downtown Press imprint.   

It definitely looks like a promising situation for writers -- and it's new enough to be a volatile and changing market with tons of opportunities.  If what I've talked about today sounds exactly like your cup of tea, I have to tell you... there couldn't be a better time to try.

 

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